All Comments on 'Gold Chains Ch. 02'

good story please update soon

I really like this story but it seems a bit rushed. While I appreciate that you didn't bog yourself down in excessive details the reader doesn't need to know, I think it could use a bit more character development and back ground; not too much, just a bit more.

There's a severe lack of characterization and background(story background AND setting) so it feels like the characters are existing in a bubble. Also it's SUPER rushed! Why are you in such a hurry to get through the chapter? Slow down

Love it! Please turn this into more than a two part series

Waiting for chapter 3. And pls take us slowly through the chapter.

please post another chapter. i love this story,

more more more more!

Oh Come ON!!! That;s it?!?!? What a shame. You displayed a good beginning.