All Comments on 'Golden Arrows'

Superb job! A beautiful loving take on the mythology of Valentine's Day. Well written, very erotic, passionate, caring, believable adult story. Yes believable because in my mind they were alive. This is one of your very best! I am so impressed with how you turned the legend ever so subtly into a unique and gifted tale of Godly love! The birth of Valentines Day, how good is that!!

Golden Arrows scored a bullseye for me.

5***** well deserved stars.

THANK YOU!

M1

What a delicious and sensuous rendition of the Psyche and Eros myth! I so enjoyed the language of passion you used and the tender seduction, the submission of their hearts, and the final eternal joining between the two lovers. And you even snuck in some pure, unadulterated naughtiness in there as well. I LOVED it! Good luck!

Great job, Red. Your aim is true.

Good luck on the contest!

I like this story. It made me smile while reading.It's well written and very erotic.I wish more mythology stories were written like this. I would have become a scholar on the subject. Thank you for the story.

Happy Valentine's day.

This is a winner -- hands down!

This is amazing - romantic and very sensual , hmmmmmmm keep it up

You work with dialog and cast a spell of feeling over the whole story. Thank you. As always most enjoyable.

Thank you for your work dear heart.

Loved the story...loved your writing...

this story which was undesribable....the chosen words the depth.... Took my breath away....

Sensuality dripped off my monitor. This was truly a gift from the gods. This story would wake up Hades himself. A stunning mastrpiece worthy of a much larger audience.

I'm becoming more thoroughly convinced that there is nothing you can't do/write.

Well written(add "Duh" smiley here,- if they make them) with not too much, nor too little!!

A delightful, page turning read that will leave you warm and smiling.

*crazy urge to search for a Bic~

This is a phenomenal love story! What a talent you have!

Cupid and Psyche has always been my favorite myth. I love this twist on an old story. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Your writing has so much more depth than my own and with this story, you display your talents superbly. I wish you much luck with the contest, this one was a joy to read!

I really enjoyed the story, very well thought out and nicely woven, but it drives me crazy when little things keep repeating, like the lack of an apostrophe to indicate the possessive of Eros' name. With a good editor, this would have been spectacular.

A beautiful re-telling of a legend from Greek mythology. Very erotic and sensual. I see another W in your future.

Red--as always you do not disappoint! As someone else commented there are several mechanical errors that could be remedied by a skilled editor...it would take your story up yet another notch of excellence. However, even with those glitches it is worth five stars, you are a literary genius! Happy Valentine's Day!!

Thank you for that tale of love and gods. I love your way with words!

Red...excellent job. I not only enjoyed the story...a lot :-D but there is this feminine sensuality in your style that is ...hmm...stirring maybe is the right word.

An enjoyably sensual retelling of myth. 5 stars!

Red you're writings are outstanding and erotic.....I think you should write professionally..... That's my opinion.

powerful stuff. I did not expect the erotic punch in a sci-Fi tale. well done.

A great job at telling a familiar tale. Shouldda been #1 but I guess I didn't vote enough times...

Jerry

Gotta say I loved it; your style of writing is quite impressive, creating an atmosphere and leaving the reader not only with a great deal of arousal, but also with a clear impression of who your characters are, what motivates them, and so forth. Excellent work!

The "poetry" of the story slips away repeatedly by the use of current slang: cock, fuck, etc...those are contemporary slang expressions, and they detract from the poetic quality of your prose. The story goes from the delightful flight into fantasy to a screeching halt as the street slang expressions are interjected. Otherwise, a well crafted bit if writing. Keep it up...so to speak!

:)

I loved this story and I added it to my favorites, but I have to agree with Anonymous. The slang, cruder words used for anatomy was a bit off putting. The story has a soft, sensual and delicate flow. Those words (pussy and cunt especially) are none of that. Don't get me wrong, I don't have anything against those words, they just didn't work in this story per say. Never the less I really did enjoy it.

I loved this story !!!!! I haven't looked yet but I swear I hope its more than 1 chapter!!!!

Excellent writing and plot development. Erotic without being trashy in the least! Paying homage to the original myths themselves. Bravo!