All Comments on 'Golden Girls'

loved it nice gentle pace please write more

Nice mix of hot stuff. Love pee sex.

Please keep writing. Pace is great and very believable.

Well written and believable

I loved the story. I hope you will write more. I really wish there would have been a scene at the end with Glenda and Beth having sex with each other alone.

This should be made into a movie, great story but needs some girl on men pissing as well.

This was such a wonderful read!! I am hoping to read more by you in the future. Especially if there is more pee drinking! I'd love to read a scene from you describing Beth drinking Glenda ' s pee and Steve drinking Beth ' s pee! Maybe a part 2!

That was the best sex story I have ever read! That was so hot! Makes me want to find some people to fuck and some piss to drink!

You had me hard for most of your story, I will be looking forward to reading more from you. Now I need to fuck my wife.

One of the very best I have read... Hope you continue with Beth's development.

in early skipped this story due to its length but I'm very glad I didn't.

if Lit had more than 5 stars you'd get each and every one of them.

of course I enjoyed the pee play, but the whole story was so genuine and well written, the emotion and love jumped off the screen.

well done for sure.

One of the top ten!

Loved the character development, just enough. The tight setting. The build up over pages. Was aroused for the whole story. The progression of the pee play was done just right. That last golden shower left me hard. Nicely done!

This is one of the best stories I have ever read here, or anywhere for that matter.

I hope that you write more and even a part 2 as I am sure it would also be great. You have a gift and I hope that you share it again and again.

I just want to reiterate what everyone else has been saying: This is an amazing story, and I would LOVE to read a part 2.

Keep up the great work.

Very erotic, hoping to see more of Gina's adventures. Loved the pee play,,, Jealous of Steve kissing her at the end,,

a most entertaining & engaging , well written story ,

5 stars from me .

was surprised by the last pee scene ,

1st pee of the day , is usually the most pungent

not unusual for pee lovers to enjoy it on their skin,

highly unusual to drink any of it as not only is it the most stinky , it usually contains the most toxins & tastes truly horrible

xxxhugsxxx

a little pee poem

if it's clear , have no fear.

slightly yellow , still no peril

very dark & alot of stink , it's not Healthy for you to Drink.

The way the Story was crafted, dealing with the feelings of loss with the help of a sexy relative just worked, the scene was natural, and the events believable. Well done keep writing. perhaps the beginning of a series?

5 Stars

The best piece of erotica I have read in a very long time. Keep writing!

Loved it, kind of thing I can wish for😜

This was the first story I've finished without masturbating. I'm about to take care of that now. Anyone else fell for Josh?

A great read, believable and very erotic. Thanks a lot...please don't stop writing.

Kind of a nice fantasy. An easy read that I couldn't stop till the end. Like the story lines and how it sounded like something that would happen in real life. Would love to read more from this author.

Enjoyed the peeing and woman-to-woman buildup at the beginning, but similar to the comment of 10-27-14, I'd have liked a lesbian combination at the end. For me, you can leave men out of this story altogether.

That was very erotic and sexy. Loved the kink. More, please.

Amazing, everything about the story is great.

This is one of the better stories I have read on Literotica. The writing was well done. The pace was perfect, and the eroticism was right up my alley. I would recommend you post more stories or even consider writing a book. Great job.

Wow!!!!! Fantastic story. Had me hooked and hard as hell from start to finish. Can't wait to read more from this author.

Loved the story especially the peeing - well written, good pace and hot sex scenes. Managed to refrain from wanking during the read but got to fuck my wife at the end so all good! Shame there has been no more stories from this excellent writer.

I have been reading stories on literotica for 10+ years and this is the best story I have ever come across. Very involved and detailed in all the right places, I would love to read more from this author.

Gina is an excellent storyteller. She paints such realistic and vivid images as she writes. And her exploration of themes is tastefully, but very erotically done. I was erect and dripping for all of it.

One of the best stories here. I love the first person perspective from a woman's point of view. So well written, it's like it really happened.

This has been an epic morning read for me, the piss aspect and the way Beth blossomed into a truly liberated woman has actually made me moist with precum.

This story didn't get written by accident. In order to write a good piece, the author has to have a lot of experience about that which he's writing. Then to put it into a long-ish narrative shows obvious, though somewhat untrained, talent. Beautifully set up and excitingly described. Thanks for writing it.

Notsolong

I had to edge for a while until the end, then I had myself a wonderful orgasm.

pretty realistic were good descriptions ! I enjoyed your story very much. Been there done that so I can believe that .. and the way you presented it all was so smooth that the writing didn't get in the way. Your imagination and maybe memory are both well told. Thank You for sharing this very warm tale. Scotty/slowrdr@aol.com PS write some more for me...

Great story, well written no errors or improper use of English (that I could find) and makes me wish . . . !!!

Despite the lyrics from Garbage, golden showers shouldn't last for hours.

One of the most erotic stories that I have ever read on Literotica. Keep up tht good work.

Gina, it was only by dumb luck that someone in the room mentioned this story and that you had written it. So glad you were still in the room and I got to your story tab, This is bar none the best story in the Lit library. Would love to hear more and will read all of your stories. Kudo's to you Ma'am.

So well written and a joy to read! Your style is so smooth and cohesive! A truly outstanding story with a perspective that is pure - hope you understand that!

What a lovely story! Well written and just a great story as well as incredibly erotic! Thank you!!

*sigh* this was fantabulous... Wish I met a guy like Steve!

That was such a sexy story. My visualization was wild. I so wish my wife would do that cause that has been a long running fantasy of mine.

By far the best story I have ever read here. I can't believe I read all 6 pages of it. Bravo!

One of the best I have read here.

Well written. Keep writing please.

So hot! Would love to have that type of encounter.

My highest elogium; rarely given, seldom merited.

I especially liked your character development, skillfully allowing it to proceed just slightly before the plot elements, with each character carrying greater or lesser weight as appropriate to the development. That's not easy to do! You managed to make each character play a distinct and valuable role while developing the erotic tension that seemed natural, not forced. Even the rarely-touched "golden shower" element was presented as an almost natural element in the erotic build-up. Thanks very much for the time and attention spent in a finely-crafted, compelling story.

Enjoyed the story. Both sexy and sweet. A litle too much peeing for me but an interesting twist of kink.

I was enjoying the story very much until they got the men involved. The great thing about these stories is, if you don't like it, don't read it. Others have enjoyed it so thanks for taking the time to write it. Sorry.

Thank you and I hope you write more like this

Hi Gina B,

This was a very hot story, I've read it multiple times. Will you write more stories like this, I'd love to read more.

Hot! Really hot! As in molten lava hot! Melting metal hot! Peeing is truly a fascinating fetish. Its kinkiness factor has become mainstream.

Being a veteran who has lost comrades-in-arms, I really appreciated this story. It was also very hot and played to my pee fetish. I really like your writing style and look forward to more of your stories.

This was one of the best stories I've ever read and the only one in the 'fetish' category. Please continue and thank you!!!

Wowww loved every bit of this story! Thx for sharing xx it was erotic hot af and so loving and sexy! Had everything you could ever wish for! Loved it *****

Awesome story, I got to read it in several different sessions. Loved it from start to finish, I hope there’s more to come from you.

damm loved this story 5* wish there was more

Wonderful story, well written and sexy as hell xxx

This story was great I wish the two girls drank each other piss though and had some more alone time