All Comments on 'Golden Lust Ch. 01'

I think you're off to a good start, and background is important. Look forward to more..

this is ridiculously similar to another story on here by amaranthya called in the eye of the storm the characters are all the same the story line the beating of the young man by his father in the sutdy. and let me guess th reason his father is beating him is because he is gay

A good start. It left me wanting to know more about the characters. There are a few gram/spell errors that it would be good to correct. Maybe get someone to read it over for that before submitting. Other than that..I'd like to read more.

Thank you for your feedback, and I will look into these mistakes.

As for similarities of my work to Amaranthya's, I assure you this is mere coincidence. I've read her newest story, and I will make some changes to make sure that they are not so similar.

I have contacted her, and so she is aware of this. I will sort things out, and I appologise for this.

But my story is on a different track, the starts just seem similar. Thuis is merely it as Aschpen sees it, so it will be different when the characters are completly brought in.

yea I agree with the other person this is just like another story called "eye of the storm", but you changed names and yours has less detail. You might want to fix that problem.

i really like this story write more soon