by HypnoticGold
Great series, but please stick to piss and spit if was possible,
Thank you.
If I was the guy in this story I would be begging them all to shit on me if they need to
omg i was totally transfixed reading this story. i would love to be in that position and have that many women want to use me like that.
please write the next chapter... this has got to continue....please....
I have begun writing Ch.11
My apologies for the long absence, but more juicy goodness is ON THE WAY.
It´s a very cool work, but please stick to the watersports and spit.
Dont´t bring scat to the series, some people blow the series with scat and farting.
(Apologizes for the bad english).
I was 100% into it until they started farting in his face and mouth. Ass ... yes! What comes out if it not my thing.
Danny is actually a poor spineless submissive idiot.
And ALL the girls are bitches
This story cant get more ridiculous and unrealistic much more.
The "Teacher Girlfriend / Student Boyfriend" names they keep spouting every other sentence is so annoying. That coupled with the farting totally killed a perfectly fine femdom/piss story for me. If a dude (submissive or otherwise) has a piss fetish, it does not mean he immediately likes scat/fart nonsense too.
The series started so well with the sister and the pee fetish but it continues to spiral into the ridiculous with every subsequent chapter.