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All Comments on 'Goldilocks & the Three (Were)Bears Pt. 01'

by BluDraygn

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pk2curiouspk2curiousalmost 3 years ago

That is different . I like it . Too bad it's just a dream . The stuff fairy tales are made from . Lol .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You should have said “Papa Bear’s chocolate-covered "magical" healing lozenge that came from his friend Max….

BluDraygnBluDraygnalmost 3 years agoAuthor

@Anon My apologies, I'm missing the reference

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

HaHa….the chocolate covered healing pill sounded just like a sly reference to Miracle Max’s healing pills from Princess Bride.

Just finished Part 2. Good story. Thanks for the read.

BluDraygnBluDraygnalmost 3 years agoAuthor

@Anon *Picard Double Facepalm* I should've gotten that. XD

taco1085taco1085almost 2 years ago

bravo, well done, this needs to continue. I say Goldie needs to take him home and get pregnant. like he said he has to find a job and start his own den....winner winner chichen dinner.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

I suggest the memory block works, at least temporarily, but Goldie gets pregnant and searching for answers brings her back.

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New story submitted! Beyond Worlds: Mis-taken Hero Ch 01 TRC Ch 43 will be coming right after this one, and posting these two together is part of the reason I only submitted the one chapter last month. Also, a new The Witch's Offering chapter is up on Patreon, as is the sta...