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Click hereI got down to my knees and kissed her softly.
"This is the best day of my life," I said.
"This is nothing compared to what we're going to do tomorrow," she said with a smile. "Now, go home. Get cleaned up. Be back here at 3pm tomorrow. And one rule: no touching your cock between now and then. Understood?"
"Yes ma'am."
She pulled me close for a hug, pressing her tits and stomach against me. The final surprise came when she whispered in my ear, "I meant it. This pussy is yours forever. It now belongs to you!"
I didn't know what to say.
"3pm. Don't be late. I'll have a surprise for you when you get here."
...to be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoThe golden shower part was definitely a "surprise". I know this isn't a site for clean stuff, but that is where I draw the line. It is literally a waste product of your body, stop that.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYou're a sad degenerated pimple on the ass of a rat!!! Try to write w/o caps, no one is impressed by your yelling and bitching! I gave this a 5
Anonymousover 9 years agoThere is nothing more beautiful than a pregnant woman, one who is not afraid to show her sexuality, one who still wants to get fucked.
What a hot story. Now finish it.
Anonymousover 10 years agoWhat every young man dreams of, yet coming true. Great start I hope there are more tales from the week to CUM?
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis site needs a junk filter cuz this one would have plugged it for sure. Come on man, you're giving erotic writing a bad name. Zero stars if they had it.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI thought it was a good first effort. However, I'm slightly traumatized by the golden shower and since I'm afraid that his "surprise" will be that he will have to eat her husband's cum from inside her, I will not continue. Please don't be put off by it. That's just my personal choice, but I'm sure that someone else loves this kind of kink.
There will be negative people and you can't please everyone all of the time. Keep at it and you'll have no choice but to get better.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThere must be a contest going on of who can write the dumbest stories. Hell of a start for this week. Notice, most are new writers. That's what we needed more trash writers.
Anonymousover 11 years agoLove the story, got a little weird with the golden shower part but worked in well with the character,also would have like to know why she was off her husband, but other than that great story can't wait for the second chapter
Lickideesplitover 11 years agoI have had this as a recurring wet dream ... Very hot and effective! However, I knew I was dreaming as it progressed, each time! Maybe I should start submitting my dreams ... Nah!
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis one reads like it was written by a 10 year old.
Anonymousover 11 years agoLoved it...hot woman, big tits, crazy sex driven to even pee and she's pregnant! You captured many of my favorite things and then some! I hope chapter 2 includes her in spike heels and hot anal! Keep working it!
Anonymousover 11 years agoPlease continue. Interesting story. At the very least you made a lot of people express an opinion.
Anonymousover 11 years agoHmm. wouldn't a more accurate definition of "naysayers" be jackasses who hate people having a different opinion than theirs? You'd be near the top of the list.
ythebadgerover 11 years agojust the fact that it was a shit story that was more about teenage fantasy and fetish than loving wife.
Anonymousover 11 years agoLoved it! As soon as you post a story with a wayward wife, the prudes come out in force. They must be up all night looking to be be the first one to pounce. A bit ironic, morals on a porn site, huh?
Anyway, keep it up. Your work is appreciated.
LordSlamdawggover 11 years agoI suspect this was written in a rush and the author accomplished precisely what he wanted. In terms of a complete seduction saga, one or two addition flirtatious meet and greets would have set the stage nicely.
Perhaps a quick sketch of the absent Mr. Wilson & why she's so down on him, outside his dig at her weight gain. That wasn't a very smart diss on his part, when this woman is carrying his baby. The pregnancy plot wrinkle was a nice break from norm.
I'm not a fan of cheaters per se, but the writing had definite flashes of subversive quality and that has charm. This writer could carve out a niche in DamonX or Scouries scamp-ish stud territory, if he works on his literary skills half as hard as his narrators do on their abs.
