All Comments on 'Gone to Kansas Ch. 01'

Hell of a start and it looks very promising.

Good start to what is an interesting tale, especially like your suspenseful lead to the next chapter

Can't wait for more.

Please post more

Great beginning!

5

Ch. 02 is pending and awaiting aproval, hopefully be approved in few days.

Excellent, I’m really getting into this.

I enjoyed it but it does read more like a diary than a story.

Great start, five stars. On to another chapter.

A nice long read. I really appreciate these longer ones.

And needless to say I'm looking forward to a lot more chapters. hint, hint.

Great start.

Five Stars...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I am enjoying this storyline and am anxious to see where Zeb ends up...