All Comments on 'Good Afternoon Ch. 19'

by Dionyus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I love this story

When is the next chapter going to be posted? Do I have to wait like I did for chapter 11 to be posted?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
love it

i think that u dont get alot of comments because there isnt much sex in the story but i love it just the way it is and i hope u keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story!

That was a great story. I would, however, like to know what happened to Marty and what the ransackers were looking for.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
WOW

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I'd love to see more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
when is ur next chapter coming out?

I want to know what happened

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

You really know how to drop characters fast.

No one knows what really happened to marty, Justin got over his mommy too quickly, and we don't know why their house was ransacked. -.-

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Editor

Story is great but you need an editor to correct spelling among other things!

Don

dphven@gmail.com

joeywhorejoeywhoreabout 5 years ago

I hope you update again really soon this is fucking hot and amazing

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