by Dionyus
When is the next chapter going to be posted? Do I have to wait like I did for chapter 11 to be posted?
i think that u dont get alot of comments because there isnt much sex in the story but i love it just the way it is and i hope u keep it up
That was a great story. I would, however, like to know what happened to Marty and what the ransackers were looking for.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I'd love to see more like it.
You really know how to drop characters fast.
No one knows what really happened to marty, Justin got over his mommy too quickly, and we don't know why their house was ransacked. -.-
Story is great but you need an editor to correct spelling among other things!
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