All Comments on 'Good Cop, Bad Cop Ch. 04d'

by SteveLeonard

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Bi47 almost 5 years ago

Mmmmmmmmm

This is getting better and better!!!!!!!!!

croydon2000 almost 5 years ago

Nice....

Great story....think the condoms should not be wasted...and maybe fed to them..or shoved in their arses before the butt plug is put in.ha.x

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

move on

Sorry to say it but the story line has stopped and now it is just a fuck story. You have the potential for a great story but are turning this potential work of art in a just fuck story for the reader to jerk off to, You are an immensely talented writer. Please expand you skills to turn this story into a classic

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