All Comments on 'Good Fortune and Damn Luck'

Had me thinking of a lady friend I'd very much like to share a fortune cookie and a moonlit quarry with.

Imagining that there could be two people so "in their heads" that they could carry on this nerdy badinage for so long is clearly preposterous, but it's kinda sweet. One gets the sense that the fantasy could equally well be the narrator's or Rori's. The image of Rori laying there on the moonlit rock, seeing to it that her wishes were fulfilled was very compelling. Thanks.

Wow. While I found the clever back-and-forth repartee a tad cumbersome, aren’t chance meetups and first times awkward? No complaints. Loved the word play as well as the hesitant, and then passionate, physical play.

Well written, and well edited SandyMarl. Hope to have more from you again ... in bed. ;)

O to be young, flirty and adventurous again! Loved the playful, flirty banter throughout. A couple strained parts, otherwise what a sweet story!

I can imagine these so-called nerds slowly teasing each other into sex. I can't imagine doing it on a rock. Scrapes, bloody knees... Oof.Ypm4f

I say, really quite good.

Can we please do that together?

There's a story on this site called (I hope I'm remembering the title correctly)

NATURE IS FOR THE BIRDS...

It has exquisite cleverness I'm sure you'll love!

Author's name? Something like KETHANDRA (?).

I loved it, but please, why do we have to have what used to be known as Roman Catholic birth control? The thought of pulling out at the moment of orgasm and squirting externally is a bit offputting after a lovely build up. And don't talk about unwanted pregnancy, this is a love stoy, isn't it, not sex ed?

5 plus just the same.

Love it...again.

Back for seconds!

Wasn't positive I had read it...your clever upfront banter

lured me in.

Sweet...Friendly...Happy Sex!

Sign me up!

Awesome story, very humorous! I wish he had cum inside her for the grand-slam win.

Smart, cute and funny.

Lots of fun! I do think however that having sex without first establishing how birth control was going to be dealt with is unrealistic. Finally, a technical error which unfortunately is common in stories on Literotica: we hear of her pink opening, viewed under a full moon. In moonlight, the light is so dim that colors can't be perceived. Two lines in a Moody Blues song say:

Cold-hearted orb that rules the night

Removes the colours from our sight

If a tree falls in the forest, and there is no one to hear it; does it make a sound?

I wonder if these philosophical lovers might ponder the question: If a young lady exposes her vagina at the quarry, and there is no sunlight in which her lover can admire it; is it still pink? ...in bed.

Is quantum sex, good sex?