All Comments on 'Good Friends'

your story had little heat to it, why do you writers insit on making your female characters small busted? your story is poorly writen and had little sex in it.

Erotic content next to nill: ruined by spelling and punctuation errors.

Hi, welcome to our kind of fun. Congratulations on writing your first story. I think you have much more to tell. You need a little editing, perhaps english is not your first language, no matter, keep writing more.

JayR

try a spell checker and your story would be so much better

This could have been an excellent story, with some semblance of even semi proper punctuation...

This is good but need a little work