All Comments on 'Good Friends'

Not a bad story, but you need to have someone read over for you. In several places you have Steve talking to the women he just met, then tell how they met Steve (when you should be referring to Rick). It kinda draws away from the story.

"fumbled through his -cloths-"

"calling him a -minuet- man"

"A -Zoon- was clipped at her side"

"It was -defiantly- a foot."

There were otheres, but these stood out.

Iiiironyyyy.

I loved it. Good work.