All Comments on 'Good Girl'

As a serving submissive who met the Dominant she serves online and went through the anxiety and excitement of a first public meeting, complete with fears of rejection, I really appreciated this story. One niggling comment -- I really thought her response at the end of the story should have been "Yes, Sir," rather than just "Yes," especially given the emphasis placed on that verbal acknowledgement of submission (and my own personal experience). Thanks for this lovely story -- I hope to read more of your work in future.

love it!

I started reading and was pleased at how well I could see myself as your character, and then I was shocked when you described her appearance, as I to have wavy shoulder length brown hair that is occasionally unkempt (especially after a flight). But I was just plain freaked out when you revealed her name as my own. Not only that but you actually had him say "get on your knees" you have no idea how much I love that. XX

OMGGG THIS IS SO GOOD. MY FAV SO FAR.