by Miyelo Ina
Excellent! My lover gives me suggestions and they are absolutely real, as were these. You captured the siren lure of the good girl indulging in the forbidden, the desire to let go.
Not only is it well presented, but entirely within the realm of the possible, which is exceedingly rare in the mc genre. Way to go!
I did not even know I craved those feelings...but oh, to be Susie! Well done.