All Comments on 'Good Girl, Floating'

by Miyelo Ina

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gypsyredgypsyredabout 20 years ago
So REAL

Excellent! My lover gives me suggestions and they are absolutely real, as were these. You captured the siren lure of the good girl indulging in the forbidden, the desire to let go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great job!

Not only is it well presented, but entirely within the realm of the possible, which is exceedingly rare in the mc genre. Way to go!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wow

I did not even know I craved those feelings...but oh, to be Susie! Well done.

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