by YourLittleAngelle
This is absolutely one of the best stories I've read on here. Perfectly described characters, emotions, etc. but most of all, I'm so happy there aren't any spelling/grammatical errors. Thanks for a great read!
This is such an incredible story and so beautifully written. I can 'see' the characters so clearly and each and every detail as well. I do hope that you continue to add many more chapters to this story as it is just way too incredible not to. Thank you for gift.
You have written some of the best erotic stories I have ever had the privilege of reading on this site. Your depth of character development as well as simplicty in story line draw the reader in, and still thirst for more when the end comes all to soon. Please keep writing, allowing us a glimpse into your world.
i wish i had a jacob....i love your writing as well :) its so illustrative and artful. i think you should be proud of this one :) i havent seen your other work yet (if you have other stuff on here).
thanks for writing, please continue :)
I keep checking back to see if there will be more of this specific series. I hope so :)
Your story is really good, flows well the characters are cool! Cant wait for more!! Jacob...what a hot goth!!! Wish I had a Jacob!
You're writing is so clear and illustrative and really paints a great picture! I love your work! Great job! Maybe just try to flesh out the sex scenes a little more and be more descriptive of what the characters are feeling during them. Apart from that yours are the best stories I've read so far on the site! Please keep writing! :)