All Comments on 'Good Grades Get Rewards Ch. 01'

A bit rushed but o.k. Thanks.

The story itself is cute enough, although a bit beyond plausible. But the biggest complaint is about verb tense. You bounced back and forth a little, but mostly wrote in present tense (meaning, outside the quotations which should be present tense, logically). The writing would be 1,000% better if presented in past tense.

Verb tense? Hmm, I didn't know we had english teachers trolling this site. Perhaps we should inform the authorities and inform them of these perverts. Nevermind the stupid arses, it was not a rushed. I like the pacing of this first chapter. I am looking forward to the encounter with the teacher.