All Comments on 'Good Guy all the Bad Girls Want Pt. 06'

by Ian56

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AxelottoAxelottoover 6 years ago
When you see your cat licking and then trying to get something off its tongue

... with an odd look on its furry face. That's what the ending felt like. Cruising along, and then "What the?" Not a nasty surprise, but not a good surprise, just "what (the hell/the fuck/just happened?)?"

After rereading the ending three more times,I have to call this a bad ending, it dumps you out of the story in an undignified manner, for no good reason.

w8ingnoww8ingnowover 6 years ago
Disappointing

You turned this into a mother son thing. Very disappointing.

blackbear10blackbear10over 6 years ago
To be honest.......

"To be honest, I wasn't sure if it would work."

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It didn't.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
Wtf

Did you forget what story you were writing. Such a good writer too.

jetoshjetoshover 6 years ago
What an Ending!

Didn't see that coming.

arrowglassarrowglassover 5 years ago
Kept wondering if he would wake up from a dream...and hoped not!

I will reserve judgment until I see what the sequel brings. Not sure how to rate this.

Aussie1951Aussie1951almost 3 years ago

What a great storyline, can’t wait for the new series with the mum but I hope he still continues on with his little harem..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

pizzaman62pizzaman62over 2 years ago

Great series. Three ladies that are friends and like different things when it came to having sex. That shows not all ladies are the same.

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

*****Very entertaining series hot and sexy. Thanks for sharing.

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