by Ian56
... with an odd look on its furry face. That's what the ending felt like. Cruising along, and then "What the?" Not a nasty surprise, but not a good surprise, just "what (the hell/the fuck/just happened?)?"
After rereading the ending three more times,I have to call this a bad ending, it dumps you out of the story in an undignified manner, for no good reason.
"To be honest, I wasn't sure if it would work."
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It didn't.
Did you forget what story you were writing. Such a good writer too.
I will reserve judgment until I see what the sequel brings. Not sure how to rate this.
What a great storyline, can’t wait for the new series with the mum but I hope he still continues on with his little harem..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Great series. Three ladies that are friends and like different things when it came to having sex. That shows not all ladies are the same.