All Comments on 'Good Hearted Ch. 03'

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SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Holee Schnike!

Flippin' In10se!

Great set-up for...

11/10 Lightning Birthmarks!!!!!

AA20195AA20195almost 5 years ago
Good Hearted

A great story , very enjoyable, please continue the tale, I will read it again soon.

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sover 5 years ago
Finish the story

This is a good story and wished for it to finish. It seems like a long time to get to Alexa and Ethan. Less parkour and gang rehab and more character interaction. The justice on layla' s stepfather & stepbrother was a cool twist. Hope you keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
when is the next chapter ?

loved the story ! when is the next chapter ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I've just found and caught up with this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
I'm getting worried

The introduction of so many threads. New heroics. More skills and talents. But with all the positives an element of darkness is creeping in. I hope you will stay closer to the title maintaining a good heart.

Others have mentioned the occasional error. They usually are insignificant but this time a missing word had me chuckling.

"Ethan cleared the table and began to run in the sink.".

lol

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love. Erotic circumstance brought them together, hope it continues.

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