by Pasego
Didn't seem like the correct position to take a virgin by having her with the pillow so described. Guess the author never took a virgin.
es una hermosa historia, que podria continuar, espero que si, te felicito, am_sr
I know beautiful isn't exactly a common verb when describing an erotic story, but that's the only way I can say it. I love the attentiveness and tenderness of your stories! Please write more!
This has to be the best story that I have read on here in months and months ! Thank you very much for such a tender love story that only fairy/tales are made of. I do hope you plan on a few more chapters to bring these two people together in only a way that I feel you can do. I know your other readers will feel the same way. There are so many ways you could go with this story to make everybody happy. Thank you again. JAG
Well written and he didn't have a 10" prick as in too many stories
Well written romantic and sweet. Fleshed out it would make a decent romance novel actually.
A very well written and realistic story. Your two characters were portrayed very well and despite the length of the story I was able to get a really good feel for and of them. I do hope you consider continuing this.
This was just beautiful!! I hope you plan on adding maybe another part to see things from 'Jeff's view'? That would be brilliant! Great writing!!!!
This story is very well written and is believable. The man is a gentleman and the woman is not a tramp. It is nice to see tenderness and realistic feelings in a story. This story has both.