All Comments on 'Good Neighbor Policy'

Liked the way it progressed and built,

There are way too many grammatical errors to enjoy this story. For the first half of the story "she" was used way too much. The story could have been better if it had been edited.

I have to agree, krappy writing.

"...(H)er breasts were large but they sagged". That says it all. "But ought to be replaced with AND. The "very little" is too little too late.

You start with Penis and Vagina, and later slip to penis and vagina. Go with the form throughout.