All Comments on 'Good Neighbors'

Great story keep them cumming

Potter, I love yout style of writing. You take time to develop the characters and slowly tease us knowing what is about to happen. Keep writing more for us, you are the best!

Potter, your work is the best erotica I have read online, without a doubt. My only suggestion is that your stories may be a little longer than they should be. I like the way you build up the anticipation, love your description of the love play, but find it somewhat repetitious after awhile. However, I will continue to look forward to reading ALL of your future submissions.

I really like the way you take your time to develop the story. It's both sexier and more realistic.

BTW, "Mark" or "Matt"?

How about that - a dream come true to life- kept me spellbound

thank you !

jack

foreplay. I quit at the end of page 2.

This is a well-conceived story, with an engaging plot, good characterization, and good drama. The story moves along at a steady pace throughout, and the love scenes help rather than hinder this throughout. However, the romantic aura of the whole story would justify it being placed in the Romance category instead of Erotic Couplings. This is a great love story, albeit obviously unfinished.

Good Descriptions so I have tried repeatedly to read this but so darn wordy and to keep interested. Suspect would make a good 2 or 3 page story but this is too darn much effort

Good premise.

Too much side chatter.

Not enough of her doing to him.

Four stars.