All Comments on 'Good Vibrations at Disney'

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Camguy4funCamguy4funover 3 years ago

Wow, great story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Oh, you have to have another chapter

We have the rest of the day to see which girls had the controls to Abbie's vibrator. I am willing to say that Rylie was one of them. What other adventures are waiting for Abbie for the rest of the day. That photo is one for the cheerleaders wall of shame.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Need a sequel. It would be great if they bumped into the same guy again. Or if one of the other girls helped get her off. Maybe Rylie but I think she maybe in control of it

AltruisticFiendAltruisticFiendover 3 years ago
Good story, but...

20-minute stand-by for Everest? Yeah, right!

Origin40Origin40almost 3 years ago

Fun little story. The build up was a bit slow, but the finale was worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Im sorry but the idea is somehow strange and hard to believe. Why would Abbie accept that?

Also hard to believe that just a small vibrator is able to make her cum. Whole story is like some teenage fantasy, before knowing reality

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

First 3/4rds is setting up the scene - totally disappointed. Good idea but poorly wordy

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Loved this story. I feel there’s more in it. Put her in a situation with somebody where she can’t get relief. The girls that are in control need to be revealed. I guess one is a close friend the other probably Riley. Perhaps she gets so desperate that she needs to turn to Riley for relief. Her best friend might take pity on her and help her also. Perhaps the 3 of them end up together. I would love to read another chapter

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Long time reader, new author. Prefer longer stories with character background. Hoping to write stories in multiple categories.