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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
more

please

aragonitearagoniteabout 6 years ago
Great stuff!

I like this story. I am, however, trying to figure out how it fits in with the April Fool's theme.

karalinekaralineabout 6 years agoAuthor
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Glad you both enjoyed it! :-)

Aragonite: according to Literotica the April Fools themes are: surprise, irony, trickery, trick endings other themes of deception, chance, and/or misunderstandings (happy or otherwise). I think Goodbye Girl loosely fits the remit.

Anon, I have another 4 chapters and an epilogue mapped out. No idea when I'm going to find the time to get them down though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Congrats!

I was captured by your story and I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Thank you for your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Noooooooooo...

You cant just end it here 😣😣😣😣

BrazenpeachBrazenpeachover 5 years ago
Pleeeaaaasssee more!!

Oh please don't end here. Need more of these two!! Wonderful story!

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 1 year ago

Me too...More, please!

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18/1/22 Small update, i have asked for the enslavement of Briseis to be taken down now, this should be happening in the next few days, so i suggest you don't start reading, unless you're prepared to read the thing all in one sitting! Thanks again for all your lovely comments....

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