All Comments on 'Goodbye Girl Ch. 04'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

A beautifully written happy story - with friendship and potential for lov at the end

This is a wonderful story.

I liked the way that the point of view changed from Orla to Greg and back again.

The extra week for the story to sit in Karalina's brain while the grammar was buffedturned this chapter that that warrants a rating of **6.0 out of 5.0**

Thank you, Karalina, for yiur ideas, talent, writing skills and hard work, and please pass my appreciation on to your proofreaders.

Cordially

Toronto Reader

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18/1/22 Small update, i have asked for the enslavement of Briseis to be taken down now, this should be happening in the next few days, so i suggest you don't start reading, unless you're prepared to read the thing all in one sitting! Thanks again for all your lovely comments....

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