All Comments on 'Goodbye Jennifer Brown Ch. 01'

JaneX you are in the lead with your partner. This is a good start. We'll see if JaneX can bring out the inner slut/whore of Ms. Brown!

Waiting with extreme patience!!

You have a really good start but please hurry and send more

... it gets harder from now on. Does your competition have a time limit as to when we see the next installment? Clearly one introductory chapter does not a story make.

Intriguing opening. Who is the competitor you're writing against?

we now know who she is, so where's the story?

…and I'm looking forward to much more, rather like Jennifer Brown.

The potential is here to take this to some very interesting places... will await your next instalment.

You have a great style here. Please make the assignation as interesting as the introduction. And don't rush it.

Really like the start, can't wait for the next chapter. Just to give balance though - who are you competing against?

It sounds like the Jenny Brown that I know

good beginning.. looking forward to next chapters. I love reading a female's perspective