All Comments on 'Goodbye Mellisa'

good. But, a 400 flight to jis house and back in a Cesana 172 takes alot mote than 4 hours.

The pigs would have brought up the other signs of brutality and not just the shots to head.

Bob is an untalented hack

If only says so many. In reality, not going to happen.

But this is a story not a bad one

As he had handcuffed her ,they would have left signs of her struggling with them.When they were not found,even the slowest of our magnificent police force should have worked out some thing was wrong.

Five stars

Not a fan or murder.

Rarely is the murder the good guy

Seriously like this one. Never miss with spec ops types, even if u don’t know they are spec ops types. Therefore respect until it is proven otherwise that they don’t deserve it. Slut got her comeuppance and she was lucky it was quick, part of his training would have extraction of intelligence from people, it could have been a lot more painful for both of them

Small idk revenge, huh?

Murder is not a good thing.

Murder with revenge and irrefutable defense, beats everything, including dicks, large or small.

Macho assholes who enjoy taking advantage of others due to position, size or strength all think alike, just like the anonymous dick.

But no one fucks with an equalizer. Now go live with your impotent self.

So murder huh? Small dik revenge

Melissa got hers! They'll be a new face in hell for breakfast!

It's different and good. Another "Best of JPB".

Well written

Plausible, no. Likable, yes.

Damn good tale. Thanks JPB. LP

I loved the fact that he had so much evidence pointing away from him. Like the 9 million dollar inheritance she was going to get. Or the evidence of the last three lovers. The only thing would be, DNA left on the scene. And did he leave the severed cock in her mouth? With the struggles that ensued, it’s possible hair fragments could have come loose from him, and been on their bodies. Although it was his house, so that could have been explained away. And I assume he wire gloves. 5 stars

5 Stars on this ne . Thank You Bob

It’s a story, it’s a BTB and a good one. I loved it.

Scores 5/5

0 stars - Sorry, but being a veteran there are just waaay tooo many inconsistencies to keep from LMFAO.

Thanks for the laughter though.

As we all know this is all fantasy, a world created by the author in which our reality is unimportant. Of course he did try to add so science fiction as far a the distance time relationship was concerned and any super trooper who had all those powers would be an interesting character even if he was unnecessarily violent.

@Nitpicabout

Why

Why does it take three hours to fly four hundred miles?. You could nearly drive it in that time.

At 400 mph it would take 4 hours, where can you drive that speed for that long?

I liked it a lot

Nitpic how fast do you think he was going. Try 400 nm at 145 kt. Thats around 3 hours. I doubt anyone could drive it in 3.

Why does it take three hours to fly four hundred miles?.You could nearly drive it in that time.

harsh but fair

1 star - useless violence and the military experiences were pure fantasy - you really need to do more research.

No real ending. What should have been a 4.5 is getting a 3

The execution route is fine but mumbo-jumbo about special forces killing "domestic enemies" is foolish. What "domestic enemies"? Under what authority? This sounds like something an elementary student would write as a thriller. You need to do a little more work if you do not want to look ridiculous.

Yeah

That is how you kill a cheating cunt wife and her fucking lover. If you are so inclined. This site isn't just for erotic stories. It is also an instruction manuel, "How to take care of cheating wives." The lover was a bonus.

Read this before. Will probably read it again.

I really liked the severing of his cheating cock. All cheating big cocks should be cut down in size! Watch out Swinger Joe!

Wow, I didn't see that one coming.

All you RAAC cuck boys should read this one, every day.

Bob hit this.one out of the park. Those cheaters didn't have time to be sorry..

Excellent! Just what they both deserved. Clean cut! 5*s.

I don't like it when the story has killing in it...where's the suffering in that..........

..... does a Body or Bodies good !!!

Now the scales of justice are even !!!

Commenters are going to be talking statute mph as I did and as the MC did when he mentioned he was 400 miles away. I fly a 172 among others. It does have the 180hp conversion but that doesn't do that much for speed. It does do a lot for climb rate and the STC gives you some more useful load. And yeah, it gives you 130 statute mph airspeed/113 knots give or take a few. A decent 150 will give you a 100 statute. The plot hole is why the fuck he filed any kind of flight plan. That needless act would remain in the system forever.

This is really all on him for marrying a first date fuck slut.

Diving toward the airport you might get 135k knts out of a 172. More like 100 knots . straight and level. Use a Mooney M22, 160 knts easy. Use a BMW K1200 much quieter than a Harley.

I think I would have put a round in each hand, elbow, foot, knee and shoulder before two in the head. But then I am a softy.

Five Stars for one of your best!

Factor in anything but a tail wind and it could be well over 3 hours.

How fast you think a Cessna 172 is? Figure air speed of about 130 something statute mph. Call it 135 on a good day. With no wind that's 2.96 hours. Seems close enough to call it 3 does it not?

Good story but it doesn't take 3 hours to fly 400 miles!

Gave this one 4 pointy things. Oddly enough, not really for the story, but for the somewhat disparate comments and the story!

Were we all reading the same words?

Overall a very fair existential experience!

The comments were all interesting, a veritable miscellany of weird people there! Good read, thank you, a bit like a Hercule Poirot ending but I enjoyed it, Thank You!

5 well deserved *****

you want a wordy in-depth look at character development. their rise and fall.

and sometimes you just want a 'feel good' story where the shitty people of the world get taken out by a psycho.

because in all honesty....spouses that cheat...and the people willing to fuck married people in their marital bed...are a net negative for society. imagine the fall outs involved. if children were in the equation. children that become dysfunctional adults.

root and stem. tear it outta society. feels good to read it.

Has to read this again. For obvious reasons, my very favorite JPB story.

...but it was a feel-good story if ever I saw one!

JPB, you've turned into such a sad, pathetic one-trick pony.....time to drop the toaster in the tub there, buddy.

All the ostriches here that bury their heads in the sand that nothing like this could happen? Highly trained people aren't capable of things like this? Really?? Let me give you an example: A Seal sniper took out a Somali Pirate when they were holding the crew of a cargo ship for ransom. The Seal sniper took the shot from a small boat bouncing around in rolling waves on the open sea. The sniper hit a head shot from one small moving boat to another small moving boat. The movie Captain Phillips documented it. Yeah, they are THAT good.

Here's another story that could keep gong. Kinda like a revaluation it keeps coming back around. Beware to all of you who thinks hes gods gift to (married) women your day is coming soon.

...great retribution story. Hope he goes after her other boyfriends. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Finally, a JPB story that I can rate at least *4. Hope you aren't a one shot kind of guy Bob.

You are one dumb sonofabitch if you don't think there are men and women who our government has taught and trained to do all those things without leaving a clue as to who actually committed a crime or maybe stage the scene to look as if no crime has been committed. (Hillary Clinton's Lawyer, Vince Foster's, 'suicide', for instance.)

This story depicted a cold-blooded plan and execution of Justice that the perp knew would have been denied by our legal system because PC faggots have lobotomized Lady Justice.

Very worthy of the five stars that I gave it.

The service has lilleraly 1000's of people like this. These silly comments are from people who've never had the pleasure of seeing their fellow man thru the sites of a weapon...Superman ? hardly just well trained G.I.'s doing their best.......

He's my hero! What a load of shit this fiasco of a story is! Are you sure he wasn't superman? Tough guy fag loves disco...that should have been the title. Gave it a generous 2.

he should remember....But & What If, TK U MLJ LV NV

So many holes the story is a sieve!

LOL

I guess the cheating wife and her lover didn't live happily ever after, huh?

Ha

@Networkguru - and you make it sound like that's a bad thing? It's just a little more routine cleansing of the gene pool.

It's still Premeditated murder....

All the morons commenting on how great it was to murder your wife cause she was fucking another also think if it were reversed she should forgive and forget. These assholes like the Muslim double standard where a woman is subservient to her husband a piece of property to use sand abuse as they se fit.

Just what the Slut needed and deserved

A feel good story ......just read the it! 🔪+🔫= 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

To the point with the fool fucking her getting his clock cleaned too. He was only going to off her but dumb ass couldn't stay away from her cheating ass. He had nothing against the guys, she was the betrayer.

I have to say, this is a very satisfying tale. In the long run who really cares about a cheating sluts excuses for cheating. Not really relevant, all that matters is that she did it and should be appropriately punished. How very sweet that the person she chooses to cheat with gets the same punishment.

re:

There seem to be a lot of Taliban readers here.

Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman),

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However; the 'Old Testament' says the punishment is stoning to death with stones.

And even the 'New Testament' says that to marry after divorce is adultery.

So the only way to marry another is to have the adulterous partner die.

- Always prefer a Cheating Wife Story where the husband gets his revenge but in this one he's made a big mistake. When the bodies were discovered,finding the lovers sliced off cock in the cheating wife's throat makes it a VERY PERSONAL execution. Maybe the detectives will go for the MOB connection,but I think they'd look long and hard at the husband for quite awhile.

- (Too bad hubby didn't slice off Turner's balls and shove them down the cheating twats throat too! And while he was at it,chop off her clit and stick it in Turner's mouth. WTF,if it's gonna get gross and violent anyway,why not go for the whole ball of wax?!

just as it should be. Also great story writing author.

Well focused non wimp non consenting cuckold. Simplest of form and straight forward. Of course this could've been extended to a long long story with lots of tension and drama. It deserves a five stars because it has great characters who don't take crap.

who are you, and what did you do to that wimp JPB?

Real good BTB.

Not a very nice guy at all the protagonist.

The fact is that JPB can not win from the comentators. Even I get irritated when he has

a husband sit in a closet watching through the key-hole. The funny thing is that when I was child it was considered quite normal for a husband to kill cheating wives and their lovers before committing suicide, but if they went to court they could plead temporary insanity. Nowadays the husband's guilt is treated differently, but if I does not kill things could get worse yet selling all he owns to divide things up with her. Personally I would have offered her the house in exchange for the business free and clear.

I wonder if Porter will have an accident?

Excellent!!! Missed your writing.

she is done cheating with a dong in her mouth.

he is one of the most prolific authors on the whole net.He must be over 80 years-old now.Glad you are still writing!

High and tight. Military style.

It really seems to have pissed off jpb's cream pie eating fan base. Fuck those nutless fruitcakes and their latent homosexual ways. Cheating cunts deserve to die. My qualm with this is Melissa was dead before he shot her. Why? Unless the bull was extremely under endowed, the act of forcing the disembodied cock into her throat with a ball gag chaser doesn't leave much breathing room. Mind you I'm no medical expert but I've heard of females dying from time to time after accidentally biting their lover's cock off, usually preceded by a moving vehicle abruptly stopping against a solid object. But hey, it was nice to read something that wasn't your run of the mill btb or jpb tale. I never bitch about far fetched plots cause it's nice to see a writer using imagination.

I don't like people dying but for what they were doing to him it's worth it . A little far fetched but a good read

where the hell did you do your service? You seem to know very little about spec ops and the type of man they require. Your guy is straight out of Hollywood central casting which means pure BS.

I can see I MUST write the wife murder is not BTB in the 99.9% of the stories several times.

If the husband or the assassin of the husband kill the lover of the cheating wife when they plan a common life after the divorce it may be BTB to eliminate the future spouse of the soon to be cheater ex wife (if the police could not investigate or it was organized to accident), because the living ex wife should start alone instead of her second marriage.

The wife murder is not BTB but sad Consequence!

The media are full of spouse murders in all over the World and these are sad tragedy.

Is this some kind of research project? Two stories in two days with very different male characters and outcomes. Guess which one is getting the higher vote! Just seems suspicious that you would submit such opposite stories.

Neither story is very good, but you gotta give credit where credit is due. Too bad you couldn't leave the now dickless asshole to live his life peeing into a plastic bag. You know, you could have cut off her clit instead of putting her out of her misery. I know, I know, can't leave any witnesses. Still, death is just too quick and painless for some transgressions.

I hope someday you will take on the real issue that you ignore or avoid in most of your stories: why did she cheat? No, not for cock, not for orgasms, and not for lust. Men cheat for sex. Women cheat for psychological and emotional reasons, and JPB does not like to explore or expound on those reasons. Too bad. Such great plots and characters, yet such empty endings.

Excellent ! Absolutely cold revenge, that's exactly what should happen to errant cocks. Better yet, wear a mask and make him survive without his cock.

A very nice BTB story.

Great story to teach a lesson to cheating wives. There is a big difference between a "Hot" wife and a "Cheating" wife. The first takes lovers with her husband´s approval and knowledge; the second is a dishonest sneak.

My wife has spread her legs for a lot of guys during our marriage. However, she has never cheated on me. Mellisa got what she deserved and justice was dished out by a cool, calm professional. This story was very, very well written and exciting.

Goodbye Mellisa!

Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman), however the Taliban in Afghanistan frequently executed women caught in adultery, even though Alla forgives adultery (Qur'an (39:53) . Some of the readers seem to have strong Taliban leanings, (100 lashes be dammed... bring on the bullets).

Hater of the Taliban

This is how a cheating wives story should end.

... As usual, this is another story well told by JPB in his style, short and to the point. I thank Bob for the story and the ending. You don't always get an ending with Bob.

Had I been the hero in the story I would waited the 9 months and taken half of her stuff. That was his reason for not divorcing her when he discovered the first bed buddy; he didn’t want to get beaten up by the courts. So he commits a capitol felony, loses his share of the inheritance and has cops in two cities sniffing around him.

Bob thank you for the story, Panther fan.

His service to his country turned him into a psychotic mastermind serial killer? It isn't going to be the cops that you've conveniently written as stupid, itll be the mafia that owns the cops that get him when their paid lackies find out that he fingered them for a crime they didnt commit. Between the assho loo e protag and the over the top murders, not much to like here unless you're from Saudi Arabia

I usually like JPB stories, but this one left me cold. No emotion, no humanity. Not pleasant to read.

NOT waiting 9 months created 7 million reasonable doubts. JPB initially withholding the dickectomy was classic cop procedure. Wearing clear eyeglasses rather than dark wraparound fit-over sunglasses over regular sunglasses - to defeat facial recognition and human identification - was suboptimal trade craft though.

Another great JPB story. Thanks for writing.

There are a lot of sick fucks out there reading these stories! Killing people over infidelity? Revenge on some level, maybe. But this? In my life I've seen those cold eyes that this soulless character apparently has. I'll repeat, soulless . Expect more out of you JPB.

What an ass

... I just wish I could've done the same thing

with my cheating ex and her last lover.

Alas, I never got retribution...

It seems that he pick a bad wife and she picked the wrong husband given her inclinations.

Well written story with an extreme solution...but maybe not so extreme considering his back ground.

"2) Why now was OBVIOUSLY so he had another good candidate for the crime: i.e. the Genovese family. None of her other lovers offered that kind of muddying of the waters."

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I thought that was where this was going, but the surprise that he was there implies this was not really a factor. Turner's death was just a coincidence. Yeah, if Turner was still alive there is a chance it could have come up during the investigation, but then, even with having to deal with his in-laws, he’d have to be interrogated, which would have created a chance of Frank’s story unraveling. Hell, especially considering his in-laws he may have an ever greater reason to cooperate just to save his ass from them.

Mellisa (title), Melisa (early in body of text), Melissa (most of the rest of text)!

Incommensurate punishment! Especially for Late(st) (pun!) Bull. The Bull made NO vows to Hubby.

Why not wait 9 months and divorce? @Lenard - Civil Courts in most (perhaps all) states do not just consider 'assets,' they also consider dependable future income, so the division of joint assets would have been significantly more equitable ... even if the trust did NOT provide a significant initial benefit.

Since Hubby could make Cold, Logical Long-Range plans, what was the value of wasting the time and energy to execute Sweetie (with a Bull-Burning Bonus)? No mention of Hubby having a Sweetie-in-waiting with whom to start a family (or even better sex?). On the other hand, Hubby lost all the great sex he requested, plus more that Sweetie initiated! And some great arm-candy.

If Hubby REALLY wanted to punish Sweetie with subtle and uncertain threat, why not arrange for Bull1 to earn a Darwin Award* by losing his nuts by accident ... making sure Sweetie heard about it in a round-about way. Then, a month or so later, Bull2 loses his entire package in a different type of accident ... with different grape-vine informants! Then wait 6-9 months for Bull3!

The story ends with "... act normal and wait and see." Wait and see WHAT? Hubby is SURE that he got away with multiple murder! If he's waiting to see if he got away with a crime which has NO statute of limitations, that ALONE is a compelling reason to NOT commit the crime! Looking over your shoulder for the rest of your life is a much longer self-punishment than that imposed on Sweetie and Bull!

* Darwin Award does NOT necessarily mean death ... just removal from gene pool!

Nor a murdered wife, even for cheating. I want to see them burn, not die. Although Bob, very nicely done. You even gave me a few idea's for my latest novel that has more than one commonalities. ;)

I hate cheaters. Especially worthless cheating cunts. Both the whore and her jerkoff lover got what they deserved. Extreme? Yes but after all, in fiction all is possible.

Five Stars