by KarennaC
My heart sank when I saw the year for this last update. Please come back! This story is so hot. I'm still pissed at that dick move he pulled, but I need more! I hope you surprise us soon, would be interesting where you take this story. I'm so hot and bothered now, so close but it ended with a bit of a cliff hanger. Does he just watch? Do they let him join in? All of these sex scenes are soooo hot (ALL of them, mf,mff,ff,fff) more please!! Until then I'll have to mark this story so I can re-read/experience all of the hotness.
please come back and finish your story.
loving this story and would love for it to get continued and gets its conclusion. please!
Its a really good story so far. But you need to make him fall in love completely and only have her ,that would be a good ending. But its yours and I would really like to read more...I loved it.
THIS IS HOT! PLEASE WRITE MORE! ONE OF MY FAVORITES!
Sam needs a firmer backbone for Jay. How about she points out that he's being a hypocrite - saying that he hates it when people don't do what they are going to do but he does it himself?
Your a great writer and I enjoyed the other stories that I read. I hope you write a couple more chapters for goody two shoes.
Absolutely loved the story BUT PLEASE finish it!! Make Jay work for the reconciliation with Sam.
Great storyline, but you need to finish the series if you please - we are all wanting to know what happens next
I have enjoyed reading this story all the way through. Please keep going with it and finish. It is too good to leave up in the air like that.
This story is hot! I hope you continue it and I hope to God that Sam doesn't forgive Jay too soon. Give him time to miss her and to realize that he needs her. Every story needs a little heartbreak! So far, I love your story!