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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's not as good as the shack stories but it's still a very good story by a great writer.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No, no,no you are truly precious to us, your readers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Seems more like Erotic Horror though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I gave this one 5 stars .. His wife was Bat Shit Crazy

oldpantythiefoldpantythief12 months ago

Not what I was expecting... at all. Things sure went to hell in a hurry, but there were still some lighter moments, like: "We'll check Amazon, they have everything". That one got me laughing, because it's just too true. Although it's not an Alfred Hitchcock psycho, it comes close. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Even with the cryptic warning about friday night movies, I totally didnt see this coming. Totally loved it. Read this just after finishing St Clair, and Ive got to say, you have one hell of a way of writing terrifying characters. I thought Monster and Spooky in the Shack were bad, but in comparision to this and St Clair, they almost seem like teddy bears.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Too dark! I read these stories for fun, relaxation. Chill man. LM

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Ok. That was a trip to the dark side. Fun, though. 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut

LeFrog08LeFrog089 months ago

This was a good second read. However, I noticed that you and the Missus haven’t posted anything for quite a while. (comment posted Aug21st 2023) I sure hope all is well at your end.

Take care and be safe.

LeFrog.

lc69hunterlc69hunter9 months ago

She is Miss Right. He just can't see it

OldmantruckerOldmantrucker9 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This one scared me a little. You see, my wife it into crime stories. Really, in to crime stories. She can tell me how done it, how it was done, when it was done; everything by the half time ad time interruption. And that sets her off big time, damn how she hates advertisements. Now I half two wonder what she is thinking while watching all that on screen mayhem. Not what I expected but a damn good story that kept me reading until the end.

DeanofMeanDeanofMean9 months ago

Holy moly double dog damn ya didn't give us anything we were expecting, but wow continue to love your stuff. I may just work my way though your entire oeuvre, not one I haven't enjoyed. thax

WisquejacWisquejac8 months ago

If you ever get that identification chart sorted please send me a copy. Thanks for your stories.

Calico75Calico757 months ago

A delightful romp! Poor Cash.... Thanks!

ImNotanAnonImNotanAnon5 months ago

The mark of a talented writer is when their readers can visualize the scene in their heads as they read the words. You do a masterful job of painting a 3-D tale for us to experience.

tralan69ertralan69er4 months ago

Funny and deadly

I like it. Quite a ride, could be a movie.

Thank you.

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I write my stories to relieve the population pressure. Too many people banging around in there and the only way to get them out is to write them out. There's a bitter ex-Navy Master Chief living next to a quietly desperate tarnished Russian angel, who is trying to keep her sou...