All Comments on 'Grace from the Church'

Very well written. Please write more hot stories. Thanks!

This reads like a teen boy's fantasy.

You have written it very well.

Any other types of story in your locker?

Catholic duty to preach door to door? You've got your religions very seriously confused.

I have been reading stories on here for a very long time. This is by far and away the best one I have ever read!!!! Keep up the great work!!! Hope to hear more from Grace. Hopefully you will get her daughter involved!!! Especially a little mom/daughter sex!!!

This is the first story of yours I have read . Very nice keep up the good work

will try and find the others 😈

This is such a hot story. I just love how the boys treat Miss Grace. You are a wonderful storyteller.

with good dialogue and action... well she certainly goes for it in the end.

I do pity the poor hubby though; in this day and age is it a good idea to get married at all at all if you're a guy with average size equipment? In this story she starts off wishing hubby was with her for protection, a feeling that is soon to be turned on its head with the promise of more action.

On a serious note does this kind of erotica encourage rape? At least it doesn't tell us with relish that this is another black teen rape of a white woman -- the only black things in the story are items of her clothing -- it narrowly but luckily misses this cliche.

If the story continues I would be watching how her relationship with and deception of her poor hubby pans out. The sub-plot of the the other girl "victim" is well handled -- well, was she a victim?

I would like to hear the story of them having their way with Heather before she got pregnant & when she was pregnant. Plus u should get Amanda involved after Grace has an orgy at the sex party. You should involve her friend from church, Lisa too. Also it b good if the boys attend church with Grace & maybe sum of the other women at the church may get involved too. Like have the boys fuck Grace n the church & she gets caught by Lisa or Amanda then they join after they see the size of the boys' cocks. just some suggests

Great story! Love the whole prim and proper woman turning into a dirty cum slut and loving every second of it. Hope there is more to come :)

So good! Please give us more. That story was too good to end there!

I'd love to read some more of your work.

Especially loved the comment, "When did you last clean up down there?" It was a young mans question. Personally I love a woman with a bush she trims to keep in her panty. More about this woman would be excellent.

is Amanda going to catch her mom being a cock slut for them boys?

Absolutely brilliant, a follow up please

I want to be her so much. This sissy needs to be a woman just like her with a gang of young men wanting to fuck me sillyl 4yourpleasureiam

imagine a part 2 where she comes back pregnant with her daughter!

i wish there was a part 2

To bad you have yet to write a follow up.