All Comments on 'Grad Student & Mature Neighbor Bond'

A fabulous first story -- had me rock hard half way through! And the fact that it's largely true is even more of a turn on! Congratulations!

Don’t switch between present and past tenses. It’s distracting. Good story line though.

More please and soon

Too a while to get going. Don't need a novela.

I hope there's more to come and a lot more dirty talk.

Pretty good first effort. I look forward to more!

Bravo! Excellent, especially for a first effort. I'm a strict disciplinarian when it comes to the mechanics of writing -- grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax, etc. -- and you passed my muster with flying colors.

Please continue sharing.

Ignore the critiques that have already been registered. I look forward to your further offerings.

Easily earns 5 stars, without benefit of rounding up.

great first story. keep going!

Great story and lucky dude. I wish I had a neighbor like her! I very much prefer older women as well! Is 10:04pm a little "shout out" to Back To The Future when the lightning hits the clock tower in 1955 .

nicely done, i hope theres more chapters coming. this story is crying for more.

Good story, one that reminded me of something almost similar that happened involving me and an older woman I worked with. Unfortunately it was a once and done, all too quickly. Next day, she told me that she felt guilty about cheating for the first time and would never happen again.

The story line as well the narration is great..

Great story! Great progression and hot climax!