All Comments on 'Graduation Day'

Great story. Let’s get another chapter.

What happens next? Do they become an item?

I was hoping for another series. Any chance of adding to “The Class Ring”. That has so much potential.

This ended just right, the imagination is the fertile ground for wondering and supposing what may come to pass. Nevertheless, it's important to keep the reader just on the edge rather than satisfying the immediate urge for more to be presented. The old days of radio allowed us to imagine many things without having it all in graphic visual detail. The same holds for knowing when to let a story end and we are allowed to imagine the rest. A lost, or nearly so, form these days!

Well written and well constructed, however unlikely the circumstances may be.

Good little story. I think he should move that little Red Muffin in with him, and give her the chances she never had. She would be very appreciative! Thanks for this one.

I really appreciated your intro statement. Loved the plotlines! Enjoyed the flow and especially the way you ended this particular adventure. Great job, thanks for sharing your talent. Keep writing!5*

Very enjoyable story. The end leaves enough implied but plenty to the imagination to make it easy to continue in the future if you wish. Great job.