All Comments on 'Graduation Day'

This was a great story! I would like to read more..ch.2 please:)

Ya I liked it I was disappointed when the story stopped

Good work on this, Jay. Very hot all the way through...a story well told!

I couldn't finish the story because I get angry every time a "writer" refers to the vulva as the vagina. Basic anatomy should not be so difficult to write about accurately.

The first half of the first page was really good. Sally being overwhelmed by the lesbian scene and trying to fight with her conservative perspective was hot. No, I am not cheering for one political point of view - I am saying that Sally was so aroused that lesbian sex became her way of expressing her sexuality and it was done without any male bashing. Hooray!

Now once she realized that lesbian sex was not going to leave her thoughts the story deflated. This is because it became apparent that Carrie was attracted to Sally which led me to believe that she had planned the sex scene at the gym. Sure enough that is exactly what happened. For me it ruined the story.

Finally to Mental_Fog - your observation is correct but who says "suck my vulva?" Vagina as a general sexual term is part of modern lexicon. Get over it.