All Comments on 'Graduation Masturbation'

great stepdad and he didn't come on to her making him even greater dad and friend

Good pacing and structure, nice slow build, you are a gifted writer.

Was a breath of fresh air.

good story, and not just for a first timer. keep up the good work.

Great start now we need more. I’m excited to see what’s next

Very nicely written. And as with all stories, you left us wanting more. We'll anxiously be waiting for part 2: the introduction of the toys and just maybe Sara. thanks for the story.

Yes, it was indeed a breath of fresh air. I really like how you incorporated honest and loving connections between the two of them, and Sara too.

Looking forward to where you go with it

Very nicely written with good character development. Hope to see many more and varied stories from you Emma!

There is a second chapter/sequel in the works. My writing has been slowed due to the holiday season, illness and some writers' block.

What a great first story. Very fun read. Keep it up!

Well done Emma, you are talented. Love your style and even more so that it was your first story here, keep them cumming :)

It took awhile, but I finally finished my second story, the sequel to this story.

Apart from the silly squirting, new carpet, new floor nonsense.

Hello Readers,

I want to thank everyone that has taken the time to read my stories. I want to wish you all a safe, happy and prosperous 2020.

Emma

How is this erotica lol. it's a weird story about someones stepdad? Ew

That is the beauty of allowing readers to comment on stories. Everyone can have a voice whether they like the content or not. I'm open to all types of feedback, thank you for reading.

A lovely story which moves slowly, but in doing so opens the door in so many directions. Sex isn't all about fucking: it can also be about 'What if' or 'What Next'. It made we wonder in a lovely sexual manner.