All Comments on 'Graduation Present from a MILF'

by milfwriter26

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
Alberto_MBFAlberto_MBFalmost 2 years ago

The description says two brothers compete, but there’s no competition here. Peter is a complete pussy.

Lawrence8675309Lawrence8675309almost 2 years ago

There’s a good story somewhere in here, though the timeline w/ the divorce is wonky. Alice is divorced, but if the kid knocked her up we’re to believe she could pass the offspring off as belonging to her ex?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Two Brothers Compete? It looks like a repeat of "muscular dude fucks milf while wimp watches."

Are we missing part two or something?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

In defense of geeky brothers everywhere, it's no fun being in a sibling's shadow. I'm hoping for a part 2 so Petey can get his share of something, maybe the mousy friend down the street who just happens to be an undercover fox.

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Agree, disappointing; it reads like the writer quit trying half way through the story.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous