by milfwriter26
The description says two brothers compete, but there’s no competition here. Peter is a complete pussy.
There’s a good story somewhere in here, though the timeline w/ the divorce is wonky. Alice is divorced, but if the kid knocked her up we’re to believe she could pass the offspring off as belonging to her ex?
Two Brothers Compete? It looks like a repeat of "muscular dude fucks milf while wimp watches."
Are we missing part two or something?
In defense of geeky brothers everywhere, it's no fun being in a sibling's shadow. I'm hoping for a part 2 so Petey can get his share of something, maybe the mousy friend down the street who just happens to be an undercover fox.
5*
Tc
Agree, disappointing; it reads like the writer quit trying half way through the story.