All Comments on 'Graduation Vacation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

Please continue Frb6gG

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
So sensual

Seeing an attractive mother naked is the most beautiful sight in the world. A great body is a bonus. The teasing mom and I did for 3 years was so rewarding.

HarvesterusaHarvesterusaover 3 years ago
Great start

Wow looking forward to seeing the next chapter

philteephilteeover 3 years ago

So far, so good. Keep it up (LOL)

reader_33reader_33over 3 years ago

Hi, this is awesome. Please share the next part of the story. Can't wait for it. Please.

xsiveonexsiveoneover 3 years ago

A great start! I hope you continue this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

Exxellent story, but you need at least 1 more chapter. You left us, the reader, wanting more of the vacation.

JoannePareJoannePareover 3 years ago

Very nice story. Love the beginning, hope you plan on adding to it, maybe an evening out where the Mother dreses to seduce her son.

XOXO

Wiking541Wiking541over 3 years ago

Hope there are to come. Nice one

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

Hope there is a part 2

Omart57Omart57over 3 years ago
Loved this!

Sincerely hope you consider a part two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great stuff!

I love that you dont fall into the trap of talking about length and bra size. This is a great start for these two and I hope we hear a lot more about them.

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
A very yummy start!

I'm hoping that this is the start to this story and that there's more to come. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

That was great really should do a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good lead in and intro. Stopped too soon.

newporter56newporter56over 3 years ago

I hope there is another part coming sometime soon

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

Loved the story but felt that the ending left the reader hanging. Hopefully there will be further chapters detailing the remainder of their vacation. Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Need to continue this back at the hotel .

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ok

A pretty good start but you ended too soon! I hope there will be a chapter 2 to “Graduation Vacation”? Please don’t make us wait too long!

Tanks4theMammariesTanks4theMammariesover 3 years ago
woowoo woohoo... when's part two??

Loved it.

madtaffcatmadtaffcatover 3 years ago
Excellent start!

More please. They do, after all, have almost a week to... err... get better aquainted as adults :-)

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 3 years ago

Part 2 would be greatly appreciated. Very nice start and smooth build.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice start

Nice start. Please follow up with some sequels

swfb70swfb70over 3 years ago

great start- now he needs to fuck his mom and then do a 3some with one of the other chicks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A wonderful thrill...

comes from having your mom suck your cock. I have enjoyed it for six years, and no woman has done it better. Great story.

Crusader235Crusader235over 3 years ago
Devil

Oh you lovely Devil. Now you hooked us but we have to wait for more! Five Super Nova Stars!

old_riderold_riderover 3 years ago
Great Start

This is good. Keep it going. As another has said, write the lab partner and her sister into the next chapter. Maybe even girl girl encounter. Mom is HOT!!!!!

bad1_bbad1_bover 3 years ago
Yes

That was delicious. Loved it

Lee2012Lee2012over 3 years ago

Hot story with intro of lab partner. 5+

Donfenelly26Donfenelly26over 3 years ago
Great start but incomplete..

Great back story, but it definitely needed more sex, details etc.. this was a good chapter 1, the readers need to know what happens till the end of their vacation. Maybe describing the mom's physical attributes would definitely help picturing it all.

MogelbaumMogelbaumover 3 years ago

Its a wonderfull start but as mentioned by another comment, its really incomplete.

It feels more like a teaser and not a story, since the introduction ways really long.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Great story with an awesome setting. I know it's been over a year at this point, but I hope you consider writing a sequel someday.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Awesome story. Sure wish my mom had been willing to swallow mine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

ok, but lie/lay malaprops...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

want more sex with mom!...

John_BostonJohn_Bostonover 1 year ago

Excellent story! I've enjoyed a number of your writings and this is among the best. Thanks!

HoltarenHoltaren4 months ago

Simply WOW. More please. I'd love to hear more about the shenanigans mother and son get up to on a nudist beach, and elsewhere.

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