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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Progressing nicely. I’m assuming that eventually everyone will be involved.

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

cant wait for More

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue!

NegamerguyNegamerguyover 2 years ago

Wonderful start, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I want to read more.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

Pretty good for a first story. I gave it 4 stars for the enthusiastic topic and to keep you writing. The subject matter was good, but the story composition needs a lot of work. Look up how to write dialogue properly and consider using at least the free version of Grammarly. Looking forward to your next submission.

WatchedBethWatchedBethover 2 years ago

Some sexy moments. I have followed you x

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Hi, I am a long-time reader of 'Erotic Stories,' often trying to put myself or people I know into the scenarios. I have a fairly good imagination and also some 'Situations' that might lend themselves to stories. Always looking to expand my knowledge and experiences.

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