All Comments on 'Grand Hunt'

Diffrent, well written, and VERY arousing! Definetly a 100. My only question now is, will there be a sequel? Will we get to meet Drew's parents? And find out what their reaction is to him having changed as much as he has?

Absolutely brilliant!!! And so fucking hot!!! Loved it!!! Couldn't stop reading!!! Please write more!!!

Oh My, i must say that was one of the best stories i've had the pleasure of reading keep 'em coming =D -Myachislav

This story sucked me in as soon as I started reading it. You get the feeling that there is a series in the making. There is more waiting to be told and you can't wait to read about. I loved it! Please continue this story!

As an avid reader of several of your other literary creations I have to say that this is by far your best story ever written. The combination of other worldly creatures, great sex and rich characters makes this the best nonhuman story on lit, if not the best story all round. I desperately hope a sequel is on the cards and arrives ASAP. otherwise keep up the great erotica you seamlessly deliver day in, day out.

Normally I would ask politely when I wanted an author to follow up on a story, but this time I cannot: The story itself demands continuation! You've done a fantastic job with this one, Joe, but you mustn't leave it unfinished. :)

I love your stories

A young couple deeply in love, easy bantering, sexual escapades, and a back drop of danger and demonology.

What could possibly make this more awesome?

i cant belive how freeking hot this storie is! even tho its not full of sex its just awsome! well done!! will be waiting for sequal!!

When narrating a love or sex scene 1) never use the word "however", 2) never have the woman say "take me", and 3) sometimes less is more.

This is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. This story has so many twists that I've never read in other stories, very original.

that was an amazing story

That was deffidently a good story, but it was very confusing at times. I almost wanted a break half-way through with an informative commentary. Good story all around though. Keep up the good work!

It was very interesting, but I'm not one for good-vs-evil or Satan-vs-God themed stories. Fair warning to others like me.

Holy hell this is an awesome story! I wish there was more!

Fantastic story keep up the great work

Wonderfully inventive and original, not to mention scorchingly hot! My only gripe is that there are a number of small but flow-breaking typos throughout the story. If you need an editor for future work, please don't hesitate to contact me. :)

I would dearly love to read a story in the same vein about an angel and a demon finding love, or perhaps a "light demon" and a "dark demon." True love, that is, not the abortive infatuation Drew had with his ex. Just a thought.

I thought I had read every story you had written, but I was glancing through while reading other submissions by you and found this one. I might have skipped over it for the non-human context, as I used to avoid those. However, this is one heck of a story. It has real potential for a series, that I hope you come back to it. I agree that there are writing issues that break the flow, but this piece is what almost a decade old. You're definitely a better writer than you were, as proven by Faith, Hope and Love. I just hope you keep writing and giving us these wonderful stories.

-J

Wow indeed! Inventive sexuality, inventive demonology, inventive theology, and well-written, too. There were some errors (and some consistent errors: your vs. you're, for instance), but the quality of your imagination made up for them. Thanks!

I know it's been some time since you wrote this but it would be great to be able to read more chapters on this story.

Agreed. Please continue.

What have you been smoking???? That's about as far out as anything I've read in a while, but good.Thanks

Suitably weird!

Da this one could of used a folowup chapter at least.

Great story and I agree there could easily be a follow up to it

[06.08.22]

Grade A, Top Shelf story writing!

A new twist on old tropes (G. v E.) a touch of Small Soldiers (1998), humour, and a great mash-up of theology and mythology - reminiscent of 'Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency' and 'Long Dark Tea Time of the Soul' by Douglas Adams and 'Good Omens' by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett.

11/10!!!!!

Wonderfully entertaining story.

Weird story. Since I am no demon, I don't know what to make of this story. Demon in love with a human? Really?!!👹🤣🤪