All Comments on 'Grand Rapids Girl Ch. 01'

Great story! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

very good story cant wait for more chapter

Superb beginning. The most plausible trans-woman depiction I've yet read on Literotica. Looking forward to seeing subsequent chapters unfold with the same degree of verisimilitude.

Great beginning. I like the tone, rhythm and characters. I look forward to reading more. xo, Di

Wonderful story!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

Well written and a great start to what I'm hoping is a nice long series of chapters!

This is amazing, I'm really invested in Maddie and rooting for her to find happiness! Can't wait to see where it goes from here

I love this. I can’t think of a story that’s managed to have such a sexy start without even becoming explicit! Keep this sexy girl’s story coming… can’t wait to see where her future takes her. Lots of love, Luke. (OK not really, but a guy can dream?) :)

Love that this is set in GR! I lived near there (Muskegon) for a few years, and I miss it all the time.

If there's one thing people there are serious about, it's their coffee, so that just makes the story even more authentic. Can't wait to see what's next!

Hey folks, I'm totally humbled and blown away by the reception to my first submission here! I know my writing won't be for everyone, but it's so very cool to know that people are enjoying my work as much as I enjoy writing :)

I'm working on this story between work and life stuff, but rest assured I won't leave these characters' stories untold. Hoping to have a second part ready sometime next month! <3

I realy want to see where this story goes. Keep up the great work.

I love this! Promising start. Would love to read more.

Girl, you are right in my wheelhouse with a story like this. And so well written, too. I can hear the conversations. On to chapter 2...