All Comments on 'Gray Jedi Ch. 08'

I have read the hole grey Jedi story and think that it is so detailed, so thought out, it needs to be congratulated on. You have given a great story that I want you to continue.

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Holy fuck, I'm not even reading this for the smut anymore (though that is a definite factor). The smut's excellent, tho, keep writing!

I have read just about every word ever put to paper concerning the star wars universe. And i must say that your work is just as good if not better than anything i have to date read. You have perfectly included known events seamlessly and have kept in the tradition that the first rule of star wars writing that all authors should respect what has taken place and not rewrite history but mold your story to the bigger history.I would consider this story a complete success. Well done please continue the story and maybe you might consider reworking it to remove the harder sexual parts and even submit it for regular publication. i feel it would be accepted well by the fan base of the star wars universe