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All Comments on 'Great in Bed'

by Bigchicklover

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A somewhat poorly credible plot with thin characters; also some persistent silly spelling and syntax errors make it hard to read. Otherwise a neat and concise little tale. Please revise and expand with more emotion and realism.

BestreadingBestreadingabout 10 years ago

Good story flow, character development. Please contribute more.

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