All Comments on 'Great Loop Ch. 05'

This is easily the best chapter yet in this exciting story, with wonderful characters and a plot that moves at a steady pace, fully engaging the reader at all times. In spite of some grammatical errors, this chapter still deserves a five stars rating for its overall excellence.

Was a great story, kind of getting a little wham bam without much to it.

Continue reeling me in with more chapters...LOL!!!!!

We Canadians don't commonly use terms like bloke, bloody hell and a few others. They are more likely to be British or Austrailian or a few other countries. Maybe the characters are expats. Looking forward to the next chapter.

this one has not got boring and has new twists and turns. Looking forward to the next chapter.