by Creekman
I put off reading this for a few days since I'd been disappointed by the last few chapters. Glad I decided to read it after all since you wrote much more about the sights along the way. Very enjoyable! It's what separates your story from the thousands of others here. There was more variety in the sexual interaction as well, rather than the boring sameness previously where everyone just blended together. This, along with your first chapter, have been your best so far.
Thank you.