All Comments on 'Great Old One Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where is it headed?! Exciting...!!!

Sex and intrigue! Tension in the marriage! Weird dead relgion! Where is this headed! Exciting story, like the angle with Mia and look forward to more parts being added. Maybe you can write it into a novel or something, I'd buy that. Very nice, I like the lesbian stuff especially, gorgeous blond Annika and English Mia....mmmmmm sexy!!!! As a Lovecraft fan, wondering when a 'old one' angle will come in but you are setting it up I think, with christinaity being dispelled and killed off. Sets up for a dark religion or a deity that rules the townspeople I think. Anyway, good work.

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