All Comments on 'Great Shower'

Lovely story, not overly sexy, but sexy enough. Also, the fact that adults attract each other, no matter how linked they are by family ties, is very natural and should not scare us. We are, after all....humans! Great writing for your first piece, waiting to read more of your work!

That situation would be a dream CUM true. It would have to continue to a dayfull of sex though.

From the final lines, it's clear the situation has been discussed further, presumably at another encounter. And even if penetrative sex is off the agenda, there are plenty of other ways to pleasure each other.

From the final lines, it's clear the situation has been discussed further, presumably at another encounter. And even if penetrative sex is off the agenda, there are plenty of other ways to pleasure each other.

Just the right amount of teasing, just the right point to pull back (though I reckon Callie could still have stroked his cock for the final moments, despite the 'no sex' rule).

Fantastic, would love to read more from this storyline.

That was one wonderful tease! It was unique because the whole story is one big tease and I enjoyed it. One of my favorites. Sequel coming?