All Comments on 'Great Vacation'

Great story so far, can't wait for mother and aunt getting involved and a finish with pregnancy!

the only thing bigger than his cock is his ego!

I liked the story but there were too many references to his "big cock". That just gets so old. Once or twice and we got it. Mentioning it over and ever just gets fucking boring.

I rated this a 4 and would have rated it a 5 except for the constant self references to his huge cock and how much cum it puts out. In this case less is more.

HUGE pussy pounder spewing gallons of jizm into a tight cunt. just how big is this HUGE cunt choker? 13, no, 14 inches with baseball sized nuts. cum on, tell us more. leave nothing out. i'll bet his slut mommy is the best though, with the tightest cunt and slurpiest mouth and an asshole that aches to be filled with all that cum so aunt jill and amanda can suck it clean. more, more, more.

so far...I give it a 3. I agree with the comments about the dude's package...enough already, sheesh! That's why it's only getting a three; sorry.

In the next part ( we ARE talking about a multipart story, right? ) you might want to focus on the Aunt...and have Mom find them together at breakfast. Part 3? Cousin and Aunt split the ''funtime'' during the afternoon...and, as Part 4 for a finish, after supper, Mom finally joins in.

Other than the problem with the 'package', a good start to add to the "Literotica" collection

Sounds like this guy has a miniture cock of his own. I would give it a 1 and this only because there aren't any lower.

Constant references to his '<i>big cock</i>' gets old and fast. That's a sure sign of a writer that isn't very serious about their work. Either that or a total noob.

very true sounding , bit i agree cockis too big, other wise very believable and i know he will fuck his mom also

I definitely wanna read more of this story.

Great story, but the final question is obsolete. Just give us a part 2, a part 3 and so on!

No one cares to hear about your 'giant' cock 48 times. Sure sign you are probably tiny in real life. Otherwise a good story, I admit.

Oh yeah, you MUST continue! And the details about how huge the cock is great! How big is it exactly, will we find out?

why do all the so called men on here have huge gigantic cocks doesnt anyone but me have a normal one

please grow up and tell the truth for once in your sad life

Dude, you gotta continue this. So hot!

An awful lot of stories get a kiss of death when they end "to be continued" as we readers never see that promised continuation! With a 2010 posting it seems like it ought to have had another installment by now! Could have been a 5 rating except for the lack of continuation.

by a highly talented writer in his mid-20s. It's a pity we don't have more such stories by LongTimeLitFan, but perhaps he's gone in for some family fucking of his own. In any case, in this tale we have big strong Tim, the proud possessor of a big fat prick, really, the biggest omg! prick that any of the family females have ever seen or even heard of, and a pair of balls to match. Tim sticks his massive dick up some of his nearest and dearest family cunts. But there's one very special cunt that hasn't yet had the pleasure of harboring Tim's prick, his own mother's cunt. Now, Tim is a bold boy and he's sure to have thought of that wonderful hole between his mother's legs, his own mother's mommy-hole. Plenty of boys enjoy thinking about their mother's luscious cunt, picturing themselves delicately fingering it, then slurping it half to death, and finally shoving their stiff young prick way up their mother's twat, till they blow their balls up their mommy. A mother's twat is the receptacle nature provides for all the warm creamy semen sloshing around in a son's loaded balls. Mothers are tickled pink by the sign of their boy's manly virility, all that foaming young sperm the boy is real eager to shoot up his mommy's incomparable twat. A boy unloads his balls up the very same hole he came out of, mom cums like crazy, and the boy and his mom smile at each other, his meaty prick still buried in his mother's cunt.

I would enjoy it if you wrote a new chapter. This was a super great story. I just wanted you to know.

Story is fucking awesome. You gotta continue it

You need to finish this so Mom is not left out.

Great story

Decent enough story but sorry, the constant references to his "big cock" (48 of them in just 2 pages) got very old very quickly and became a turn off about halfway through the first page. I appreciate the fantasy but how about something more realistic, or at least with about 46 less references to it and how much cum he was able to blow.

Not a bad story per say, but the big cock overkill was way too much so I could only give 1 star

Chapter 2 ever coming?

You’ve started with a great story. Please continue.

Great story hoped you got your cousin aunt and your mom knocked by you because I did it tii my aunt mom my cousin and sister we all live in same house we have extra large adult play room where we have swinger orgy parties 4 woman entertain myself and 30 of my friends we make sure we pump are sperm into them and knock them up mom and aunt three kids each come out of them cousin sister each had 6 kids and both on their 7th kid each both mom my aunt in their 50's both of them said time for you guys fully gangbang my sister and me hardcore style by time mom aunt were done from fucked hard in their ass and cunt multiple double penetration and screaming both end up being knocked up again after giving birth my aunt end up delivering black baby as my mom did too when aunt the baby she yelled out loud give more black cock told my cousin and sister want see both of deliver each black time cam sister cousin had each group black guys both delivered black kid each