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SexinatiSexinatiabout 7 years ago
Oh dear!

No, don't worry, There was nothing wrong with your story.

The only problem is that your Orc has almost the same spelling as the name of my brother, just add another k on the end and you would have the name.

So, it was rather awkward, all things considered... But anyway, I like the story.

So, I'm going to give a shout-out to a fellow young author, who is also from 'Stralia'. I'm new to sex-writings as well, and also from Australia, and is also young, so you aren't the only one. :)

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Relatively new to the world of smut writing, so any and all criticism is definitely appreciated. If for whatever reason you want to talk to me, go on ahead and send me a message, I'll get back to you as soon as I can. And should by chance you want to send me a story idea, I ...

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