All Comments on 'Gretchen Lovewell'

I read the first part of the story, but I think it's lacking without the illustrations.

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I didn’t miss the illustrations at all. The story stands on its own very well without the artwork. Another great story!

Could you put on your bio page the order of all your Jack Grierson stories. They look really good but I would like to read them from start to finish. Thanks RR

I enjoyed the illustrations, and I really enjoy the premise of Gretchen’s character. She is a mother figure in a sense to jack. I would love to hear about jack fucking Farah, Gretchen and, Miranda at the same time. Or replace one of those girls with Trixie Ann and you’d still have a great story!

The story was way over the top, but I enjoyed it regardless.

BTW, I can see the illustrations .... and my computer is old junk with a Vista OS!

Thank you for putting the order on your bio page. I will start reading today.

Thanks to all who have commented.

I'm working on culminating the Jack Grierson series that was started by my older sister Roberta many years ago.

jjxa2012

Jxa2012, your *sister* wrote the first one? Jack Grierson, the brainchild of a woman!

Now. *that’s* a plot twist, as good as any in the stories.

Your stories are weird, by the way, and such over-the-top cartoons, but they get me off!

Rusty Rover, start with His Son’s Fiancé, part 1, and read them all in order. Then the Jack Grierson Chronicles. After that, it gets sketches, but you’ll figure it out.

Is this true story or just fiction?

On my gosh. This story made me so horny. I want a dick so bad. I can’t wait to suck it and caress it. Then feel it inside me as a cock fucks my fuckin pussy.

Rape apologist