All Comments on 'Grieving Time Pt. 04'

Ok, you are brilliant! Now that I have said that, I really enjoyed your story so far. I love the way you build up the story line. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks for your time and imagination.

But stories that get abandoned don't attract a loyal readership. I'd prefer a completed story on the author's computer and a note at the beginning that this is completed and being posted in n parts. I know that doesn't leave room for feedback while the story is being written.

As a plot device, I like the intervention in following the phone number note. Clever.

I had to stop reading for a moment to stop laughing. It's a fitting name, I'd say. Well played on his name. Well played.

I missed the first three chapters - the whole story line is believable and the pace superb. Well done indeed

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!