All Comments on 'Grounded'

Wow. And not in a good way. Short. Pointless. And Polly is a stupid slut. There is no redeeming quality of this story. Dad's an asshole. Mom's crazy.

Corny Story,

Did give this a three ( 3 ) , but with quite a bit of concern.

The rating is for the style and quality of your writing.

Your topic and storyline, however are quite uncomfortable and selfish. If you are going to participate, at least share the potential for pleasure.

Ok second part!

Mom buys numbing cream and dad uses it to enjoy some more bonding time between them

I agree with the other comment

Loved the story, maybe a continuation with more torture?

Story idea is ok, but I have to agree with an other comment.

Your storyline is totally wrong. It is like driving over a bumpy road.

I actually loved it

Well good thing this story is some weird fantasy because the mother could be locked up for cuffing the daughter to the bed. And if the dad will go to .

I don't know why people are being so harsh on a free story you're posting, I love this one in particular, as well as all your others, but this is my favorite

I like the numbing cream idea